My rating is based on the humor in your video (except the laser part, kinda kills it). As far as art/animation...I'm not going to harshly judge on that because not everyone is an artist or animator. :)
The time vortex has got me scratching my head, lol. That is cool looking.
I've been wanting to do this style for a longtime (I'm an amatuer). Now I know what it will look like (if I do it right) lol. Actually working on something similar now:)
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